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TestingKiss me 'til you're drunk
And I'll love you 'til I'm sober
Let's waste away the night
Then we'll figure out if this is over

I want you to get lost
In the words I won't remember
Just recall you fell in love,
The remnants of an ember

I'll sweep you off your feet
And try to land off mine
But if this is one sided
Things will still be fine

I want to be your benchmark
A cut above the rest
So come and taste my lips,
We'll put this to the test.

I Love YouFour years ago today
Was the first time those three words
Passed from your lips,
Hovering in the air,
Between telephone lines,
On patient but anxious heartbeats,
Waiting for my answer.
Why was I so afraid?
I had a feeling it was meant to be,
But perhaps I just wanted to be sure.
It didn't take long for me to know;
Sign after sign lit the path
As you guided me by hand.
We should be sitting together now.
For seemingly the millionth time, I should be saying,
With a hint of sheepish laughter,
"Remember the first time you said 'I love you?'
Remember how scared I was?
Were you scared?"
You should be wrapping your arm around me,
Saying, like you alw

Gonna have to wake up eventually...Well ain't this just interesting,
my dream of black was gone,
replaced by just a fantasy,
a story to never go on.

We moved down just past the wooden beams,
as she followed my sweet love,
the young ones they looked at us,
while we walk in each others arms.

We run just past the corner,
stare in each others eyes,
a kiss is woven,
love reawoken, oh joyous sparks.

She pulls away quite quickly,
as i look to my right,
a friend of mine approaching,
good thing it's dark in light.

He didn't see a thing,
but both of us in blush,
we walk out quite lovingly,
he's confused; we couldn't help but laugh.

She says that now she knows,
just how much i love,

Forever True?This will break
Our relationship or make
Our relationship; so
Let me see how this goes

I am a girl
You are too
I am lesbian
Be mine forever true?

Into the astral of knowingMy heart is darker since i took the bait,
but i leap with this broken legs to the light and cling the darkness in memories.
Let it stuck under my skin, miseries are all tested for me.
I beckon you the morning that sleeps,
i have never seen the mourn in your dreams.
You have seen death whilst your eyes is closed...
Dear, tell me nothing... to know that i comprehend.
All the things i pursue was with the wind, and with me.
Like a tar in my lungs that i called life.

What was with this light?
The glorious ascends to the cloud weeping, ragamuffin.
I ask him, if i can still see my father.
This light that blinded me said,
he was busy helping me bui

As i am present in this world.As i am present in this world...
I realize i was only a flesh.
I do not belong here. I am filthy, & rancid.
Molded by sins in time...
But also in time molded again by the element of sins to renew.
One day this soul will linger through the light that i have never been with.
Or maybe in dreams, i do sometimes ascend.
The real life whom i thought that sleeps...
starts to beckon me in dreams.
It was vivid in our youthful and innocent days,
But as time flows, flesh decays we have become what we are now.
I flow, we flow.... in time like clouds passing by,
Pictures of memories, Frame by Frame. Countless And Priceless.
One Time And An Absolute remem

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Write it all out.

In Him I See Myself.In his eyes, I see a lifetime,
I see a past of happiness and sorrow,
And one of pain and enjoyment.
I see a present filled with hope,
And one anxious and hidden in fear.
I see a future,
One of greatness and triumph,
But one that requires strength and determination.
In his arms I feel wonderful,
I feel at peace and protected,
And as if all is right with the world.
I feel loved and appreciated,
I feel happy.
In his voice I hear compassion,
A voice in which all wavering is hidden,
Even though it still exists.
I hear a softness that is sincere
As the quite truth is revealed.
I hear kindness and reassurance
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If You're A Bird, I'm A Bird.

by ~flutegirl211, May 28, 2011, 10:11:59 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Urban & Spoken Word

This bird, she soars.
High,
High,
So high.

And yet…

This bird, she's dying.
Slowly,
Slowly,
So slowly.

You'd never know…

This bird, she fears.
Scared,
Scared,
So scared.

It's the loneliness of…

This bird, she's caring.
Considerate,
Considerate,
So considerate.

Being there…

This bird, she sacrifices.
Enduring,
Enduring,
So enduring.

For everyone…

This bird, she's tired.
Exhausted,
Exhausted,
So exhausted.

Causing this.

This bird, she's dependable.
Trustworthy,
Trustworthy,
So trustworthy.

If You're A Bird, I'm A Bird.by ~flutegirl211

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / General / Urban & Spoken Word

a reflection of my mood.

so i tried to be a real poet. i don't know that it worked. the bolded words are supposed to work with the stanza below it, but then form its own message when put together. like i said, i don't know that it worked.

!HinataLikesPandas Jun 3, 2011

I absolutely love this~

~flutegirl211 Jun 3, 2011 Student General Artist

really? thanks so much! like i say in the description, i'm not sure how i feel about it yet, so i really really appreciate that

!HinataLikesPandas Jun 3, 2011

Yes, really~ No problem, sweetie! Don't doubt yourself, ever. Or limit yourself~

~flutegirl211 Jun 3, 2011 Student General Artist

for sure

is there anything you think could be changed or edited though to make it better?

!HinataLikesPandas Jun 3, 2011

Well, I thought it was just fine written the first time. I'm not really a believer in going back and changing/editing, because it's not the original feelings you wrote. Poetry should be raw.~ So, nope!

~flutegirl211 Jun 4, 2011 Student General Artist

that's actually a really neat way to think of that. i really like that perspective!

!HinataLikesPandas Jun 4, 2011

I'd offer it anytime!~

~SnoringFrog May 29, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

Making the bold stuff work with the following stanzas yet forming it's own stanza worked pretty well. A few of the main stanzas didn't feel quite right though. Namely, "caring", "sacrifices", and "dependable" didn't seem to flow as well as the others.

~flutegirl211 May 29, 2011 Student General Artist

yeah, i agree. i was just too tired at that point to think of what would work haha. i'm sure i'll be editing it at some point. i'd like to see this piece work.

~SnoringFrog May 29, 2011 Hobbyist Writer

Ah ok, cool.

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